官方公告文件的英文翻译水平有待提高

blocker

除了很多Chinglish，还有语法错误和小的笔误。

比如下面这篇（粗体是我看到问题的一些地方）：

NINGBO Greenery&Landled Cup 2006 FIVB World Grand Prix News interview arrangement public notice

NINGBO Greenery&Landled Cup 2006 FIVB World Grand Prix will be held between September 1st to September 3rd . Four national teams will attend this Grand Prix, which are The Republic of Azerbaijan, Cuba, Poland and Chinese national women's volleyball teams. Domestic and overseas presses are welcomed to report the tournament. And some relevant items are listed as follows:
I. Application:
  Download the from the websites of www.volleyball.org.cn，www.cva.com.cn，www.blwtj.gov.cn, www.bl.gov.cn or www.vbol.com.cn. Fill in the form and send the letter to organizing committee news department of FIVB World Grand Prix NINBO LEG before August 20 th, enclosed with the identity card photocopy, reporter certification photocopy or the original recommendation letter as well as 1 color photos of 1 inch(or a JPG digital photo).You can also fax it between August 21 th to August 25 th .
  CCTV and BLTV have the exclusive broadcasting rights to the NINGBO Greenery&Landled Cup 2006 FIVB World Grand Prix . After registration has been checked, all other media and news reporters (except accompany reporters of each competing team) will only be allowed to conduct their reporting activities outside the stadium. Thank you for your cooperation.
Contact：Zhu Jingxia  Tel：86-574-86781958
Zhou Xiaochun Tel：86-574-81619788（24 hours）
Fax：86-574-86781957  E-mail: bl2005vb@126.com
Address：Sport Bureau ,Beilun Ningbo, No.1166 Changjiang Road, Beilun district, Ningbo, China  （Post code：315800）
II. Accommodation：
The appointed hotelManhattan•Tiangang Hotel
Tel (switchboard)86-574－56216666
Fax86-574－56212345
AddressManhattan Plaza Section B .xin da Road Beilun,Ningbo
(West of “Tianrunfa”Market)
Others(1)Standard of Accommodation：200 RMB/person/day (Half for two persons), please settle your account with the hotel
(2) You will get your certificate and your meal tickets during the FIVB World Grand Prix when you check in.
III. Remarks
1. According to the FIVB’s arrangement, the Press Interview Control Committee Meeting will be held at the international hall on the second floor of Lebanner Xingguang Hotel at 16:30 August 30th. Hope all the media and reporters will attend on time. (Tiangang Hotel will support the shuttle in advance)
2. .The hotel provide the service of buying the return ticket of airline or railway of you, appoint in advance
3. During the FIVB World Grand Prix, special shuttle bus between the hotel and the court—Beilun Sports and Arts Center will be for reporters.
4. Free Internet access will be offered in the hotel. Long distance calls in the hotel and the news center will be at your own cost.
               
Chinese Volleyball Association
                   Organizing Committee of FIVB World Grand Prix NINGBO LEG                                
August 1st 2006


这个坛子上海外的网友不少，多几双眼睛帮忙看看，这些错误都可以避免的。

blocker

除了很多Chinglish，还有语法错误和小的笔误。

比如下面这篇（粗体是我看到问题的一些地方）：

NINGBO Greenery&Landled Cup 2006 FIVB World Grand Prix News interview arrangement public notice

NINGBO Greenery&Landled Cup 2006 FIVB World Grand Prix will be held between September 1st to September 3rd . Four national teams will attend this Grand Prix, which are The Republic of Azerbaijan, Cuba, Poland and Chinese national women's volleyball teams. Domestic and overseas presses are welcomed to report the tournament. And some relevant items are listed as follows:
I. Application:
  Download the from the websites of www.volleyball.org.cn，www.cva.com.cn，www.blwtj.gov.cn, www.bl.gov.cn or www.vbol.com.cn. Fill in the form and send the letter to organizing committee news department of FIVB World Grand Prix NINBO LEG before August 20 th, enclosed with the identity card photocopy, reporter certification photocopy or the original recommendation letter as well as 1 color photos of 1 inch(or a JPG digital photo).You can also fax it between August 21 th to August 25 th .
  CCTV and BLTV have the exclusive broadcasting rights to the NINGBO Greenery&Landled Cup 2006 FIVB World Grand Prix . After registration has been checked, all other media and news reporters (except accompany reporters of each competing team) will only be allowed to conduct their reporting activities outside the stadium. Thank you for your cooperation.
Contact：Zhu Jingxia  Tel：86-574-86781958
Zhou Xiaochun Tel：86-574-81619788（24 hours）
Fax：86-574-86781957  E-mail: bl2005vb@126.com
Address：Sport Bureau ,Beilun Ningbo, No.1166 Changjiang Road, Beilun district, Ningbo, China  （Post code：315800）
II. Accommodation：
The appointed hotelManhattan•Tiangang Hotel
Tel (switchboard)86-574－56216666
Fax86-574－56212345
AddressManhattan Plaza Section B .xin da Road Beilun,Ningbo
(West of “Tianrunfa”Market)
Others(1)Standard of Accommodation：200 RMB/person/day (Half for two persons), please settle your account with the hotel
(2) You will get your certificate and your meal tickets during the FIVB World Grand Prix when you check in.
III. Remarks
1. According to the FIVB’s arrangement, the Press Interview Control Committee Meeting will be held at the international hall on the second floor of Lebanner Xingguang Hotel at 16:30 August 30th. Hope all the media and reporters will attend on time. (Tiangang Hotel will support the shuttle in advance)
2. .The hotel provide the service of buying the return ticket of airline or railway of you, appoint in advance
3. During the FIVB World Grand Prix, special shuttle bus between the hotel and the court—Beilun Sports and Arts Center will be for reporters.
4. Free Internet access will be offered in the hotel. Long distance calls in the hotel and the news center will be at your own cost.
               
Chinese Volleyball Association
                   Organizing Committee of FIVB World Grand Prix NINGBO LEG                                
August 1st 2006


这个坛子上海外的网友不少，多几双眼睛帮忙看看，这些错误都可以避免的。

君临

问题是那些帖子不是海外的家伙搞的!

执著的月神

大家努力提高素质
做可爱的中国人哈！ [s:20]

毕业生集市

[s:23] 怎么都是between啊~

blocker

我的意思是说，在文件翻译过程中，英文好的网友可以帮忙校对，以免发表后出洋相。

这个坛子上硕士博士一大堆，愿意帮忙的肯定也不少，真的希望此类官方文件翻译以后能有所改善。

华利波之恋

虽然不可否认楼主是好心，但是我依然觉得没有必要。
新闻、报道、消息最讲求的是时效性，尤其是这种众多坛友都迫切关注的外国球队的相关东东。
斑竹们在翻译的时候已经在尽可能短的时间内竭尽全力了，有些无碍理解的小问题我想应该可以得到了解。坛友们也没有必要计较得这么细。这里毕竟不是专业的翻译论坛。
斑竹们也已经贴出了消息的出处。
自己要考验自己的翻译能力、提高自己的翻译水平的话，自己去看原文即可。

blocker

你理解错了。

发到论坛上的这些恐怕都已经印刷了，而且跟我们也没有特别直接的关系。因为这个坛子和北仑的组织者们有直接联系，我的建议是说以后组织机构翻译文件的过程中可以利用坛友的帮助将工作做得更好。一来方便来访的外国球队，二来可以帮助北仑主办机构的人员提高业务素质。

引用第5楼华利波之恋于2006-08-12 17:37发表的“”:
虽然不可否认楼主是好心，但是我依然觉得没有必要。
新闻、报道、消息最讲求的是时效性，尤其是这种众多坛友都迫切关注的外国球队的相关东东。
斑竹们在翻译的时候已经在尽可能短的时间内竭尽全力了，有些无碍理解的小问题我想应该可以得到了解。坛友们也没有必要计较得这么细。这里毕竟不是专业的翻译论坛。
斑竹们也已经贴出了消息的出处。
自己要考验自己的翻译能力、提高自己的翻译水平的话，自己去看原文即可。

ginoz

是的，感谢楼主的真诚建议。
女排主场在今年年初招聘了一批翻译方面的志愿者，他们大多数是外语专业背景，甚至一部分是国外留学的背景。很多翻译资料我们也是通过这部分志愿者当然还包括很多专业翻译共译的。
对于存在的纰漏，我想我们及时，尽快修正。就如CVA的外事部对我们的要求，如果宁波请不来一流的翻译，又如何承办2007年的大奖赛总决赛。
再次感谢楼主真诚建议

drdr

between... to......看到这个翻译我真是没有话讲了……

xinluan

真好，论坛还可以温习一下英语，学习一下很多运动专业术语

blocker

谢谢回复！

我自己是学社会科学的，而且有一个跟英文写作/编辑相关的学位，所以看英文比较挑剔。国内甚至港澳台的英文教学，我觉得是有些问题的。多些交流，提高的空间还很大。

如果有帮得上忙的时候，可以短信或者e-mail跟我联系。我想还有很多人象我一样愿意为中国排球的国际化出力。

引用第7楼ginoz于2006-08-13 18:47发表的“”:
是的，感谢楼主的真诚建议。
女排主场在今年年初招聘了一批翻译方面的志愿者，他们大多数是外语专业背景，甚至一部分是国外留学的背景。很多翻译资料我们也是通过这部分志愿者当然还包括很多专业翻译共译的。
对于存在的纰漏，我想我们及时，尽快修正。就如CVA的外事部对我们的要求，如果宁波请不来一流的翻译，又如何承办2007年的大奖赛总决赛。
再次感谢楼主真诚建议